It Started With A Kiss

I was bored during work and came up with this for some entertainment.

It started with a kiss,
that left us with such bliss;
the love that we did have.

Her smile was so bright,
from the darkness to the light;
when her face shone with hope.

Eyes just like the blue sea,
that filled my heart with glee;
mending my broken soul.

The body of a goddess,
makes her very modest;
Aphrodite in form.

The warmth of her big heart,
stole my gaze from the start;
my eyes have yet to stray.

Her radiant, tan glow,
exemplifies her show;
true beauty lies within.

The spell she has casted,
has done all but lasted;
forever and always.

All the moments we'll miss,
it started with a kiss;
our book has now ended.

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is sweet, beautiful, and has a nice imagery for the readers to imagine while reading this poem! I like the flow and rhyming you got going on there! Haha. It's well-written indeed! :D

"All the moments we'll miss,
it started with a kiss;
our book has now ended." I love that stanza! Even though I haven't had my first 'real' kiss yet! Crazy, right!? :( Haha

Ashley Rivers-- Keep writing! :D

[dillonjensen]

Thank you very much! Glad you liked it. :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome :)

[melissa]

this had a awesome flow to it great job:)

[dillonjensen]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is sweet! An ode to the goddess in your eyes. I like the rhythmic flow within this piece, almost feels like a song. Nicely done, my friend. :)

[dillonjensen]

Thank you! Means a lot. :) Have a great day as well!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You're welcome. It's such a lovely write. :)