Two small oceans.

Two small oceans.

A Poem by saying goodbye forever

 

The colors of sea flowing within two small circles.

Continuously changing and shining in the light.

It dosnt seem as so, but to me its one of few miracles.

I can see the desires and all she is as I hold her through this night.

In this endless ocean I can see when her heart cries.

All because these oceans, are my lovers eyes.

© 2008 saying goodbye forever


Author's Note

saying goodbye forever
Once again in class.
Dont worry about spelling.

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It is totally cool! I love it! I can see the oceans!
^_^

Posted 16 Years Ago


Hoooooly, I was actually picturing bodies of water until the ending which totally caught me off guard!! :D

Posted 16 Years Ago


A wonderful write and such lovely imagery of your love's eyes. Thank you for sharing

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 14, 2008
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