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A Poem by dilettante1890
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An image I can't get out of my head.

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Fire beneath the eyes

& a heart dripping with rain.

© 2008 dilettante1890


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Short sweet and to the point.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Impressive. I've never seen such expression in so few of words. This is stunning.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh I like this! Hmm...

Fire and desire. Passion and pain...

Perhaps?



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Touching, deep very deep

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmm�Are you referring to the anger of being disappointed in love?
If it isn't that than I don't know :P.
Anywayz, it's kindda kowel bcuz it's original and touching.

A.M.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 3, 2008

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