Child to Man

Child to Man

A Poem by The Analog Kid
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Just remembering my grandfather 8 years after his passing.

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I walked in there

scared out of my mind

yet

with the resolve of steel


it had been a long time

since death was at my door

announcing his presence


avoiding reality

is the way I wanted it to be

you suffered for long

and needed to be free


and in the end

the love was too strong

and I had to say goodbye

before you were gone


as I held your hand

I took the trip

once again

from child to man



© 2013 The Analog Kid


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Death takes hold of us so quickly sometimes. I know it was that way when I lost my father. He was terminally ill though but died instantly. The values and the love that he instilled in me my whole life are still ever present with me. Life is so precious as I am reminded with this poem. One can't ever express the sadness it is completely engulfing at times. The memories are very much a part of my life. Thanks for sharing this, you wrote it very well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Analog Kid

11 Years Ago

Thanks Stacey. I really appreciate the kind review:)



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We are never ready for death but we all face it now and then... a very heartfelt piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SO SWEET AND SO DEEP AND SO PERSONAL AND SO HONEST. I BELIEVE WE WRITE BEST WHEN WE WRITE FROM THE VERY BOTTOM OF OUR HEARTS AND THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT YOU'VE DONE HERE. LOVE IT!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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