I Still Do

Just riffing off my favorite Cranberries song.

Even though

I don't want to

I still do

need you

in my life

and I know

your sweet harmony

won't let me be free

if

I choose to

resign

myself

it's about my liberty

I don't want

to love you

but I still do

Reviews

[Ees]

Nice poem. I certainly know the feeling. You did a wonderful job, here, of displaying that in poetic form. I really enjoyed the second to last stanza, that stanza in particular stood out to me as a place that displays the battle between loving and wanting to move on. Love, to me is something that doesn't seem to be able to be controlled at all.
Nice job!

[The Analog Kid]

Thank you for reading. Those are the type of reviews we could use more of as far as substance whether good or bad. I appreciate it.

[Ees]

Thank you for appreciating my review! I am often not that light, but I happened to really like your poem! Haha. I just always try to be honest when I review.

[RachelReaper]

Don't you hate that feeling, when you want to let go but you can't? Nicely done.

[Antonio Valentino]

Even though

I don't want to

I still do

need you




in my life

and I know

your sweet harmony

won't let me be free


waww that is really deep Pat

almost like, forbidden fruit.. which can be just too sweet sometimes.

awesome thought friend

:)

[The Analog Kid]

Thanks for the beautiful review brotha:)

[Antonio Valentino]

you've got a profound heart good friend

:)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I know this poem,, so true.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Powerful stuff, and it has to linger. You have to let it linger.

[Emily Rae]

beautiful...love can steal our liberty

[?]

Love the Cranberries, nice piece...rift away