Just Take It All In

Just Take It All In

A Poem by The Analog Kid
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Just listening to Eric Johnson's "Ah Via Musicom," reading, and thinking of winter constellations.

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The music is saturating all around

you are quite amazed at what you found

hearing some lyrics

you read and look

at the pages of some book

 

and to your surprise

right before your eyes

is that very word

your ears just heard

 

The winter night sky above

you stop to admire with love

seeing a shooting star

...stops your heartbeat

in time to see it streak

 

and soon you realize

right before your eyes

the cold begins to melt

it’s that miracle your heart felt

© 2013 The Analog Kid


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The Analog Kid


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Miracle your heart felt That is what i depend on quite often as i cannot effect outcomes as i once could

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Beautiful poem Pat :) As always you manage to squeeze as much meaning as humanly possible out of a very few words. Well done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Spellbinding beauty on paper! I loved it! you are truly gifted!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

an amazing write

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was amazing. Well you know I'm a suck for music so those first two stanzas really had my attention. And then the poem turned out to have an extremely deep meaning. Very beautiful! Great stuff Analog Kid!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful…
just wonderful…..


Posted 13 Years Ago


A amazing poem. A person with wide open eyes can see miracles in the free and simple thing that surround his life. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice job Pat. The words flow so well together. That's a great song too. Forty mile town is one of my favorite Johnson songs. There's another called "once apart of me", that's really good too. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Hey, hi there. This is awesome, great rhyming and smooth flow.
Loved the ending.
Awesome song, by Eric Johnson

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful! I'm in awe of this poem. Great stuff! I love this music too.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 11, 2011
Last Updated on March 10, 2013
Tags: constellations, music, winter, Eric Johnson, shooting star

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The Analog Kid
The Analog Kid

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