Urgent (with JR)

A collaboration with a strong sexual theme**All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental*****

Sometimes ..properly soft
with strawberries galore...
but with this sax,
not so much.

instead I get a bruise

on my back

from the washing machine

or the garage door

or the emergency brake

or the cement floor

 

that’s what happens when

you want to fly without

your feet on the ground

…broken things

…unexpected cuts

your insane desire

fuels the fire

 

at times, when I think

we’re alone, your cats watch

this unholy dance

hearing the screams

probably wondering

who the real animals are

well, I guess it’s us

…and that damn alto sax player!

 

even so it's worth the ending
though the bruises may need tending
and the rug burns may just linger
and I might've sprained my finger

it was so sublime despite
all the cuts and scrapes tonight
I didn't even hear the cats
while I was listening to that sax

 

and I throw in a few more pumps

despite all of the crazy lumps

I really whacked my head

why not do this in bed?

 

and I hope you’re not bitter

I spilled the kitty litter

and we’d both agree

…an emergency!!!

 

**** 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

Now this was just not fair! lol It's got a photo with legos in it and not a darn thing about legos in the piece! Sigh... ;) But I gotta admit you captured a fun and highly charged scene in your ink. Nice!

Aaron

[The Analog Kid]

Thanks Aaron:) Haha...this was a fun one to write...lol!

[Priscilla Sayers]

Quirky, fun and full of sexual playfulness. It is a great refreshing light~hearted write.

[The Analog Kid]

Thanks for checking it out:) Much appreciated.

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Funny! 2nd stanza's awesome! I love the reference to cats watching. My cat does the same thing. I always wondered if she had any clue what we were doing.

[The Analog Kid]

Haha..thanks. This was a crazy fun one to put together. BTW...I think the cats know:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

:D that was funny man! Good job. I'm still laughing a little

[The Analog Kid]

thanks it's a couple years old and we did it as a collab. My friend Rose is a month older and a great poet. We had to pay homage to some Foreigner!!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Exactly! Its only right. They deserve it. What's your favorite?

[The Analog Kid]

Probably "Dirty White Boy" is my favorite.

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

OH boy, this is way to literal and i love the places you've been through.

too lyrical and funny, very interesting indeed.