Even in the Quietest Moments (with justrose)

Collaboration

Why is it that      

when I'm alone

I think of you?

I find no peace in solitude.

 

you’re my secret star

please won't you stay?

no matter where you are

you'll never fade away

 

in sunshine or rain
or shadow and doubt
in depths and in sleep
or out and about

 

the song goes on unceasing

trying to tune my heart

the music that you gave me

needing you from the start

Author's Note

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Hey kid you haven't loss your touch to woo for love thank you for sharing, good read.

[The Analog Kid]

Hey long time, Brother! Thanks so much for the comments!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yeah ur welcome keep on writing

[Robert Haigh]

A good collaboration. An expressive poem.

[The Analog Kid]

Thanks for the review Robert!

[Relic]

Isn't it funny how some people never leave our minds no matter what we do? There's an internal anchor somewhere in our minds that won't let us leave. A testament to how powerful love can be.

Good one, Pat and Rose. :)

[The Analog Kid]

Thanks Tim. Just like the song Crazy Love by Poco. Right?

[The Analog Kid]

I put this one up for my buddy Tim (Relic). I see he just paid homage to this song, so I revived a 9 year old collaborative poem I wrote with Rose.

[Ladysue]

such a beautiful piece...romantic...i adore the ending...good work..

[just rose.]

I love the artwork you chose for this one. Thank God I managed to somehow unearth it from the various threads; a quiet poem for a quiet song.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Peacefulness always brings out the most thoughts... I guess they have more room to fly around without all the noise taking up space... you two are such a great team. Another great poem.

[Jenny Nelson]

What a beautiful and romantic piece. (I'm so out of it.... I've been looking around these last few seconds wondering where the bird chirping is coming from with the TV off and it being dark outside. Now I note the music player.) Definitely can feel the hope and desire in this piece. Bit of longing that can be a tad painful at times. Well done!