Emotional Rescue

I was listening to the Stones. Having fun with lyrics again. Always loved this song because of the sax throughout:)

I was dreaming last

night

that you could be mine

as a sax played just right

a poor girl

in a rich man's house

like a child

and it felt so right

into the night

I'll come to your emotional rescue 

Author's Note

Reviews

[jkhatz]

There is something to be said about a true poet, which you have more than proven yourself to be. The formatting gives it the sensual feel mirrored in the words. Like the rich layers of a sax played with passion, the tone of this piece flows over me and makes me want more.

[The Analog Kid]

Thanks, much appreciated:)!

[Another Relic]

Nicely done Pat. Cool poem.

[The Analog Kid]

Thanks TIm!

[Another Relic]

No problem Pat.

[Harley (arbiter)]

That was pretty cool man. I liked it. Short sweet. That's the way lol

[The Analog Kid]

thanks brother. I heard the Stones calling so I answered lol... yeah I like the short writes...

[Harley (arbiter)]

You gotta answer! Its a crime not to lol

[The Analog Kid]

hell yeah!