Falling With TemptationA Story by BrookeAn allegory of the story of Adam and Eve. When
I abandoned the crisp air of night for the sweaty and drunken air of Beaufort
Bar, I was intimidated. The dark glass doors closed behind me and I felt
whisked away into a parallel world of reflections shaped by pulsing waves of
artificial light. I hurried over to a bar table, feeling strikingly out of
place with my innocent intentions of having a simple meal. A man with a bottle
haughtily tipped into his mouth eyed me as I walked by. Even when masked by
darkness and the assumption that most people in here would not have a full
memory in the morning, I still felt as though I did not belong. Two more people came strolling in
through the glass doors. A woman of ethereal beauty, wearing such a
conservative dress that barely any skin was visible, guided by the tight grip
of a man. “Roxana, would you go grab us a
couple of club sodas?” The man asked, placing his hand against her ivory cheek.
She made her way to the bar so immediately it seemed dutiful, and I watched as
the man leaned against the wall and stared into the crowd of gyrating dancers. His
eyes then fixated on Roxana as she neared the bar. A genius was not required to see
that the bartender at Beaufort Bar was more than willing to indulge. Every time
he poured an attractive woman a drink, his promiscuity announced itself to the
world and his green eyes glinted. “Can I have two club sodas for
myself and my boyfriend, Cole?” Roxana asked, demurely folding her hands on the
bar’s reflective black surface. I found it curious that she made sure to
specify the name of her boyfriend to a stranger. “Just club sodas? A girl like you
should have a sophisticated drink,”
the bartender chided, peering up at Roxana from under his dark brow. She smiled
and averted her gaze from his imposing eyes. “Thank you, but really… I only need
two club sodas.” Cole was now standing upright, his
eyes in a squint and still glued to Roxana. “Come on, just one tiny little drink,” the bartender
persisted. “It’ll be on the house.” He turned to the display of ornate bottles
perched behind him, and after a few seconds of deliberation, dug beneath the
counter to emerge with a ghostly blue bottle. “I give this only to a few people,”
the bartender whispered playfully, winking a green eye and pouring the liquid
into a glass. “Really, I--” “--Have you ever had a drink before?”
He quipped. “Well…yes, but--” “--Then just try it,” the bartender
pleaded. Roxana placed a finger on her crimson lips in thought before taking a
club soda and hurrying back to Cole. They whispered amongst each other for a
few seconds while the bartender eerily leaned over the counter. Roxana glided back to the bartender
with an amiable smile and hesitantly took the drink he had poured for her. I
had never seen someone show a more gratifying smile than the bartender did when
the liquid seeped past Roxana’s lips. She looked surprisingly self-satisfied
when she placed the empty glass back onto the counter. Cole was intently
drinking his club soda, never taking a breath until all of it disappeared down
his throat. “Wasn’t that good?” The bartender
smoothly inquired. Roxana nodded, and when the bartender poured some more, she
gratefully pressed it to her lips and swallowed. Enchanted, she asked for
another glass and walked over to Cole in a meandering line. He appeared
offended by the offer, but after persuasion from Roxana, he accepted the glass.
A glaze spread over his eyes as he sipped the liquid. Roxana smiled and went
back to the bartender to continue her conversation. “I like your necklace,” the
bartender cooed. “May I see it?” Roxana handed him her silver
necklace with a circumscribed triangle as a charm. The bartender gave a quick
grin. “There’s an engraving. AA… what does
that stand for?” “Alco--n-never mind, it’s nothing,”
Roxana stammered. The bartender handed her back her necklace and she quickly
shoved it in her pocket. Cole waved his hand for another drink and Roxana
immediately came over with one. She then asked the bartender for another for
herself. Eventually, I lost count of how many times this pattern recurred. Cole began talking to another girl,
an antithesis of Roxana with her gossamer clothing and seductive movements. His
shoulders were loose and his feet were unstable as he constantly shifted along
the wall. The flirtation became overt when Cole did not reject the woman for
resting a hand on his shoulder, even though Roxana was obviously his
girlfriend. His glass was coolly tucked into his leather-clad elbow. “So, how is that boyfriend of yours
over there?” The bartender asked, knowing that Cole was nearing the verge of
unfaithfulness. Roxana seemed oddly puzzled by the question, but nonetheless
answered with the generic reply of “okay”. The bartender’s smile grew devious.
He abruptly grabbed Roxana’s face and kissed her, to which Roxana responded in
her alcoholic haze. A loud crash of glass resounded through the bar. All eyes turned
to Cole as he ran forward and shoved the bartender away from Roxana. Fists met
jaws in a bloody fight, the vodka bottles fell and spilled all over the floor,
and Roxana could do nothing but stand still in shock. The bartender stumbled
away, and in an instant, Cole’s foot met the bartender’s chest and he flew
back. The back of his neck slammed into the hard wooden corner of a table, and
his limp body slumped on to the floor. Roxana gazed down at the blood caked on
Cole’s hands and fainted amid the spilled vodka. Liquid fingers climbed up the
pure white threads of her dress and blossomed into a sickening mess of colors.
I heard sirens approaching. The police were quick to restrain
Cole in handcuffs while paramedics attended to Roxana and the bartender. While
a panicked crowd surrounded the area and whispers clouded the air, I pushed my
way back to my table to retrieve my wallet. After being ushered outside into
the rain with the rest of the crowd, I heard the shouts of the now revived
bartender. He had done nothing wrong, he did not know “the girl” came in with
her boyfriend, the boyfriend was obviously drunk and he overreacted, etc. When
questioned by the police, Cole could do nothing but accuse the bartender of
breaking his and Roxana’s long-standing sobriety and fooling around with her.
The paramedics had yet to revive Roxana. Her raven hair shrouded her face and
her pale arm was stretched away from her torso, as if she was reaching for
something that had been taken from her. I began walking back to my apartment,
the scene too outlandish to bear. I knew I would not be having a drink any time
soon. © 2014 Brooke |
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