The cycle

The cycle

A Poem by Jackal

Another life blinked out of exisitence, you cry,you sob, you ask why did it have to happen, you say you will never get over it but you will for the cycle of life must go on or it must end, there is no mid ground, no negotiation..just a final decision. 

© 2010 Jackal


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Jackal
wrote this when someone close to me died...tell me what you think of it?

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I remember reading this before. Some time ago. Said I liked it, and I still do. Except, I don't entirely agree. A cycle is what it is because it doesn't end. So, yes, it goes on, it doesn't end. That final decision, I think, is when it (the cycle) becomes something else. So in that respect I suppose it does end...
Food for thought, no? Write on!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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