Wanna be my lover

So you wanna be my lover

And love me like no other

 

Do you want to touch my body

And love me for an hour

 

Do you want to make me better

And fix what you think is broken

 

Am I your crutch to help you hide

Those parts of you that are gone

 

Can you bear to see me cry

Do you know just who I am

 

Do you feel me in your soul

Would you give it all up for me

 

Is it more than touch more than words

Does my connection help you heal

 

Do you smile when I shine

Can you be yourself with me

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Hello again Didi,
I found your poem quite interesting. And, I read you reviews..
The differences in love are also quite interesting..
I am like Pete..all in and after numerous attempts (when I was young) I found the real thing and have lived happily and been more of who I am ever since.
Finding the right person can really help you see yourself more clearly. Shine stronger..
So you are in North Hollywood.. My husband lived the first part of his life there (until he was 20) and I lived in Hollywood..
Really enjoyed your words.
Lisa, now in Spain

[roarke]

Lovers and love, hopefully, an ever deepening connection. Well crafted.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very few people I have been able to be myself with when dating or being married.

I am much better off alone...I can shine then...
giving up our soul for another is quite a compromise...I am like Pete...fall in love too easily...
no more.
j.

[Re-Pete]

i definitely need an emotional connection. i fall in love very easily but when i do i'm all in. soulmates so to speak. nice peace - very relatable and real. well done ... :)