Willow

My wishes for a girl

I will name her Willow

and she will sway in the breeze.

Easy to swing but not easy to move,

because she is stubborn like us.

She will be carefree in life,

but not careless.

And she will love all life.

Willow will be beautiful

and she will love her father,

because he is good to her.

He never hits her or tells her she's stupid.

She will have his hair

and her mother's eyes.

Willow will never weep

and Willow will never break.

 

8/30

Author's Note

Again, don't know the exact year but let's say 2001.

Reviews

[Wunderlich]

This is definitely an interesting piece. Like Flame DM said, it draws the reader in. Nice work.

[Flame DM]

makes me feel like the narator was abused and wants better for her kid. again, want to know more from her perspective, its good, you draw the reader in