Days End

this is kind of all over the place

I raise my face to the sun

I smile even though the day is done

the amber waves of golden light

fade to make way for indigo night.

If only life could be night and day

all my troubles could be washed away

I have a new chance

to live my life like its a dance.

A new partner now and then

an opportunity to make a friend

I whirl around the dance floor

and I keep asking for more

The beat is in time with my heart.

I wait for a new song to start.

The music plays on 

as I sway along.

I wait for the colors to shift

for the sky to darken

for a new beauty to lift

and the past to be forgotten.

Reviews

[Emrick]

evrybody's past is bad i dont know why except of the kings and princes.
I like yo ryhme scheme.

[Wolfwind]

Your poem has a dreamy quality to it's energy. I can feel a flow and a pulse of both longing and memory as well as hope and peace. It seems this piece might be the representation of a moment of reflection and pondering of the past, it's woes, the now, and the future yet unwritten. I like how it touches of many little things in life. It gives me pause to think and ponder it's meaning and the images that it invokes.

Thanks for sharing!
Aaron