21 Birthday

As we'd planned the day before, I went to my boyfriend's house to celebrate his birthday. Not only was he not there, he wasn't answering his phone, and his grandma scolded me. Now I'm pissed.

No more trying

to do things for you

it's just left me crying

unsure of what to do.

Sleepless nights spent planning

for the big day up ahead.

And when it finally arrives

you're found playing dead.

Too much fun the night before?

Did you forget about me?

When I brought coffee to your door,

your grandma scolded me.

Deeply embarrassed and ashamed,

I wanted to kick your fat stupid head

till you apologized to me.

But you're still unconscious

and you still forgot about me.

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Don`t ever let him forget !

A cute poem which I suspect is
a mirror of life. It is about a cute boy
whom I suspect is also a mirror of life.
Things will get better, they usuallly do.
You are a clever writer, that should save the
day for you, day after day.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[diaphanous]

Thank you :)

[Eagle Cruagh]

No Problem--- I had to write to you anyway.
Once we have seen Diaphanous it is hard to stop.
See, I will write about the obscure, or you name it,
like Thank you-----well, I thank you too.