Essence of Sunshine

American Haiku

Bees drawn to honey
Distilled of nectar rare
Essence of sunshine

Reviews

[HoorayForUnderdog]

Essence of Sunshine would be a great brand name for honey, dont you think? They could put your Haiku right on the label!

[Barbary Chaapel]

The next time I taste honey I'll think of this poem, Dianne.

Nice poem - I love bees.

[Becca]

I feel as though I have just sipped sunshine.
It's beautiful and it's you..An American Haiku

[Rainbowco]

Nicely penned, regarding the second line and the missing syllable, Basho was not one to sacrifice beauty for form.

[Micheal Teal]

Essence of Poetry

Well done.

The simplicity of this piece is its beauty. Your words are nectar for my poets soul.

[Legion]

An American haiku? What does that mean? Second line needs one more syllable if you are following the 5-7-5 rule. As for the haiku, it is an excellent image. Good work.