Essence of Sunshine

American Haiku

Bees drawn to honey
Distilled of nectar rare
Essence of sunshine

Reviews

[Robin Barben]

Can totally picture that.

[Frank Terino]

beautifully written and transpiring, lovely imagery, and nicely expressed, keep up the great work.

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

beautifully written. in some wierd way i could almost feel and picture myself in a field of some sort of yellow flower, unrecognizable by the smell. so sweet and so calming. the air so cool with the sun shining in a clear blue sky. great write. love it.

[Delilah Dunn]

Beautiful and simply so. Thank you for the refreshing read.

[Emily B]

Reminds me of the purity of Emily Dickinson. Loveliness in every word.

[Tomás Ó C..]

Honey indeed is the essence of sunshine...

[Bonnie]

This is nicely done!

You did pack lots of meaning into these 3 lines. Good imagery. Nice analogy.

[Mimozi]

I don't know much about haiku but I love this piece. Each word counts and fits to make a delicious morcel packing so much for its size. Beautiful.

[radian7]

Liked the parallel of the essence of sunshine with the honey of distilled nectar rare.

[K. Aurora]

This was cute! It reminds me of watching some of our old neighbors gather the honey from their behives. Honey is a very beautiful thing, especially when the sun is shinning through it.

Kansas :)