Perfection

Perfection a path
Travel east, continue, improve
Not north, dead end road

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

That was one of the shortest prose poem I've read in a while, yet it sure does mean a very long list of things. I can't really say one simple thing about what I see in it, because there are too many meanings and I can't pick one to answer...

Anyway, it's real nice and simple read. Somehow, it just gave me a lot to think about...

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

seems to me that you know in what direting you're going in life. great work.

[HoorayForUnderdog]

Good thing someone gifted me a compass on this site because my GPS is broken and I really dont need to hit any more deadends in my life! Diane I enjoyed your Haiku!

[Dempsey Wilson (D.L. Wi..]

Mysterious. Simple, concise, yet ambiguous. I like it!

[Becca]

Thought provoking.

[Dizzy-Izzy]

The sun rises in the east... travel toward a new day... yes? There is always a new day, another chance to get it right... to strive for perfection.

A heavenly arrow might point the way, but it's cold in the North. I'll leave that region for fairytales and polar bears.

I'm not sure my inner compass keeps me pointed in the right direction. I seem to find myself on that closed road in spite of plans and careful mapping to the contrary. Hmmm. Some literary GPS... I like it.

Thanks Dianne

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This is a cute and witty 5-7-5. Thank you for sharing