Zombie Love

Could you love my dead heart for it is tattered and torn.
Could you look in to these soulless eyes, and see past this pain.
Could you lay in to these useless arms and not feel the cold.
Could you want this decomposing body as it slowly decays?
Could you hold on to feelings that have rotted away?
Could you live with this corpse inside me?
There is nothing in me worth saving.
I wish I could give you a whole heart,
eyes that could see your love and laughter,
arms that could hold you with warmth and tenderness,
a body that is worth giving without bruises,
and feelings you could hold on to for the rest of your life.
For all I have to share with you, is a zombie Love.

Reviews

[Fantasyfairy]

A sad and meanful poem. When a heart is closed it is hard to let anyone in, and then it hurts when someone comes along and tears down the walls that you have built up. A very intense and dark piece of writing, but very well done. XX

[chris' girlfriend]

wow that poem is amazing!!!
i love the picture that goes with it too :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When we have a heart so jaded that it can't open up all the way to the gift of love it's hard to have a happy relationship... if someone truly loves you they will except what you can give and maybe eventually bring your inner love back to life. Very intense and dark write... Excellant.

[Robert Luna]

Heavy is the heart that wrote this piece as the image of desire burning so deep it hurts to imagine anything else. The style of this piece made it feel more urgent and purposeful. The mean is very personal and the outcome must be waited on with no where else to turn but to yourself.


Well Done!!!!!