Vampire Rain

A torrential down pour.

 

As crimson pools in puddles.

 

Screams thunder through the night.

 

flashes of life waming away.

 

A vampire swathed in a blood bath

 

of his own making.

 

His laughter swells like a tsunami tumbling

 

past his lips in waves of delight

 

soaked by the splatter of his victims life fluid

 

he revels in the vampire rain.

 

Reviews

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A deep and dark write.....wonderfully written and a great picture!!

[Legion]

You ever see a vampire in a feeding frenzy? It sucks.

Okay, that was bad.

The poem was a visual feast of the macabre. Well done.

[George Love]

Chilling!!! Stark images of a vampire feeding frenzy. I got my crucifix ready, just in case!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Ooooo....gosh, I love it!!! Awesome write!!!

Heather