Vampire Rain

A torrential down pour.

 

As crimson pools in puddles.

 

Screams thunder through the night.

 

flashes of life waming away.

 

A vampire swathed in a blood bath

 

of his own making.

 

His laughter swells like a tsunami tumbling

 

past his lips in waves of delight

 

soaked by the splatter of his victims life fluid

 

he revels in the vampire rain.

 

Reviews

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A deep and dark write.....wonderfully written and a great picture!!

[Marie]

I'll say it again, I loved it, Diana. Where in the world did you find that pic from Carrie. It works well with the poem. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!

[H. A. M.]

Ewwwwww! or is it euuuu! ? All I can see is some guy going for the jugular on ....nuns? School children?
or is it those b*****s from delta house? Whatever the case, it seems like it was worth the blood letting.

[Fran Marie]

OoooooH I like this chilling write and the pic of Carrie compliments
this perfectly ~ WelL DonE I Say!!~Fran Marie

[Daryl]

I'm seeing images from "The Queen of the Damned," that scene where Lestat wakes up with Akasha to find she's brought him a "gift" of dozens of victims. (If I'm remembering it correctly.)

The image from "Carrie" fits perfectly!

[Autumn Dawn Gorny]

Very nicely done. Good write.

[Alexander Rivera]

It reminds me a lot of Slayer's song "Raining Blood". I like my vampires, so this one really stands out. "He revels in the Vampire rain." - Great line. Carrie, vampires, Slayer - I guess it all fits in the end huh? ;)

[BrightEyes]

very descriptive work ...I can see the rain, hear the thunder and envision the vampire laughing as he devours his victims life force...nicely done!

laura

[Marie]

Great job, Diana. Love the pic. Fits perfectly.

[Andrea A. Wentz]

Interesting twist on the usual view of Vampires. They have been likened to homicidal maniacs, the romance and alure removed while being dressed up in pretty words.

I like it, a different and unique point of view!