Vampire Rain

A torrential down pour.

 

As crimson pools in puddles.

 

Screams thunder through the night.

 

flashes of life waming away.

 

A vampire swathed in a blood bath

 

of his own making.

 

His laughter swells like a tsunami tumbling

 

past his lips in waves of delight

 

soaked by the splatter of his victims life fluid

 

he revels in the vampire rain.

 

Reviews

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A deep and dark write.....wonderfully written and a great picture!!

[Chiquita]

I like this a lot. You capture an elegance to the vampire. Thank you for sharing. This is the first piece of yours that I have read, to my remembrance. I will look for others.

[Donald Meikle]

I love the prom pic. Bloody good job on the poetry too

[Stacy A. Foster]

This reminds me of the scene in the last Hostel where the woman's fantasy is to bathe in the blood of her virginal victim.

Creepy and dark yes, but there's something sexy about it too.

Cheers,
Stacy

[Brentley]

Creepy, creep, creepy. That made me shiver after I read it. I liked it, but it gave me the creeps. The whole things is pretty cool and I enjoyed it.

[xX-tito24-Xx]

Great poem, I think you really managed to capture the savage side of Vampire Lore, and using a pic of Carrie from the Prom was really original and a great idea.

Congrats on this :)

[Bubo]

Great descriptive piece!!
I remember the pic well too...............dark piece........and superb imagary.

[Nick Erickson]

A very dark piece, the last bit - "he revels in the Vampire rain" very fitting, especially for the picture. Good one.

[Zane Mathias]

ohh. i am in awe at how much i like this one. Great job!!!!!!!! :{} B.P.

[Charlotte Rose]

Very dark yet well written.. I really enjoyed the flow and the visual is great.. GREAT WRITE!!

[Dead Angel]

very dark and morbid and the picture gave me chills. i also like the description and metaphors, great job! :)