If Only....

If only I could be, your everything.

 

If only I could be, the one.

 

If only I could make you love me.

 

If only I could have seen,

 

What It was that I was doing to you.

 

If only that I knew,

 

that pushing you away,

 

would only break my heart,

 

If only I had said I love you,

 

before you walked away.

 

Then maybe,

 

I would have been your everything,

 

instead I am nothing,

 

and all I have is......

 

 

IF ONLY

 

 

Author's Note

THIS IS A RESTORE..... AND THIS IS ONLY FICTIONAL NOT WHAT I REALLY FEEL

Reviews

[Chris Zahar]

Unfortunately, it's not fiction for me and the way you've captured every emotion that I feel so perfectly really makes me wonder. I almost cried reading this and I'm going to send it to the person whom I would've dedicated it to, had I written it.

[Claire P.]

It sounds very real, especially seeing how you said you havent lived it.

[Ice QueenJen]

This was beautiful, and again different from your other style of writing. It's something I am wondering right now with the one I love.

Happy holidays and happy writing!

[Brette Medb]

Such aching loss and regret...this may fiction but it rings of true emotions.. great write.


Brette

[T. L. O'Neal]

Fiction or not, this was great and heartbreaking at the same time. Too often we forget or don't realize what we have till it's gone. Wonderful message in this piece Diana. T

[Legion]

If only wishes would come true. So sad.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow. For a fictional poem, this is an amazing write. Great job!!!

Heather

[Ladysue]

I am glad it is fiction too, but you wrote with such passion and regret. It was a sad piece, but very often this is how it is in relationships and that is such a shame. An extremely good write!!

[Crazy Cat Man]

Im glad this is fiction. :) If it was real i'll be like damnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!! but im glad your happy. Its a great talent to write from that perspective.