If Only....

If only I could be, your everything.

 

If only I could be, the one.

 

If only I could make you love me.

 

If only I could have seen,

 

What It was that I was doing to you.

 

If only that I knew,

 

that pushing you away,

 

would only break my heart,

 

If only I had said I love you,

 

before you walked away.

 

Then maybe,

 

I would have been your everything,

 

instead I am nothing,

 

and all I have is......

 

 

IF ONLY

 

 

Author's Note

THIS IS A RESTORE..... AND THIS IS ONLY FICTIONAL NOT WHAT I REALLY FEEL

Reviews

[Chris Zahar]

Unfortunately, it's not fiction for me and the way you've captured every emotion that I feel so perfectly really makes me wonder. I almost cried reading this and I'm going to send it to the person whom I would've dedicated it to, had I written it.

[Being.john.sweet~The Ev..]

if only... what a heartwrenching piece...well done.

[DonGilbert]

very sad.

[James K. Blaylock]

This is so sad. It truly sucks just having 'if only' to hang on to. Great write.

[Vampstyle]

If only, yes that is probably everyones thoughts once in a while. I like this a lot.

[ILLusive]

if only i had done so many things differently, but then today i would have nothing to write about :D

[Tamme]

I love the mood of this piece as depressing and regret filled as it is. Very good writing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well first off it's great to know you and your husband are happy...

Now for the poem... these are words I think we may have all uttered at one time and felt like this... then we find that one we really want.

[Fantasyfairy]

Nicely done. A great and lonely poem, full of pain and sorrow. Hindsight is always the worst emotion. XX

[Charlotte Rose]

Very beautifully written.. A great write!!

[Anne Martin]

Shh, that is something I've been feeling for years - if only. It's hard not to live in the past. Lovely work.