Trapped

Sleep induce memories from a
long ago past.
Has taking me down a lonely path.
I cry to the sandman as he laughs
From above, like my pain and misery
is his orgasmic love.

Please oh please leave me be,
these visions that hammer so
endlessly.
My mind is exhausted from all this loss,
but it isn’t just my heart that it cost.
Each night I lose just a little of me,
that person I once use to be.
Something inside me has seem to snap,
as mere mortality has come to pass.

Please help me,
Help me.....
Wake me up from this madness,
a loneliness full of sadness.

Take away this agony that resides inside my soul,
the pieces of what use to be me, whole.

My sorrow lost to the masses of despair,
flanked by the horror of knowing my heart
has been stripped bare.

I am trapped in my own head in a drugged
state of my own stupidity , all I ask is to wake
from this dream of longevity.
or lose myself forever in the bleak darkness of
death,
the only end to this hell is with my last breath.

This coma that keeps me under, screams for release
as the last sound I hear is a long steady beep.

 

 

 

Reviews

[*** Hey Jude***]

You have painted a masterpiece with language! I know what it feels like to have your heart ripped continuously to the piont that death seems the only release. Well Done ~ N

[Autumn Dawn Gorny]

The forbidden apple and lust for an quick end, is summed up in this poem. Well done.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A very vivid and powerful read. You have done a great job with your words and I also like the picture as well.....MINT!

[Fran Marie]

An Excellent write ~ wonderfully penned and expressed~Fran Marie

[Marie]

Excellent as always.

[Jenny Davis]

So POWERFUL! Depression and loss are two things very hard to beat...you expressed this tremendously well :)
Hang in there, hun :)

[Haden]

ooh, like suffocation - frightening! you really created a very isolated, terrified, hopeless environment. great write! for a moment
i thought that the long beep was meant as an alarm clock - silly me, always the optimist! then i thought, if you're that
forlorn ... sure, pull the plug! smiles, deep write.

[Nick Erickson]

Very vivid and imaginative writing.
I like the depth... the darkness of this.
I'm so tired and now I want to sleep...
Well done.

[Forest Green]

Wow, that was a horror of the mind. My did you ever, ever, enclose this one in a seemingly inocuous capsule.

Powerful...'like my pain and mysery is his orgasmic love'...

Where did the words come from? Putting a voice to silence.

Thanks for the submission.

FG

[Ladysue]

Diana, wow, this was really a sad piece. The last two lines were excellent!!

[Angelheaded Hipster]

Armada...the song is One by Metallica....and I cant remember the movie though....but yes...that film sampling is divine for this piece...

I like the piece as a whole, there are some typos and grammatical errors that could be swept up, and shined...but other than that....it's an intense ride for sure.

Ive been in a coma before...and I wish I could remember everything....