Lost Beyond Reason

Lost Beyond Reason

A Poem by Diana Owen Busy with Life BBS!

Lonliness embraces me,

 

On most days I cry,

 

Still I continue down this long path

 

That takes me no where fast

 

Besides this hopelessness that haunts me


Every day of my life.

Your memories fill my every second

 

Only to remind me that you are gone

 

Now i walk endlessly

 

Down this broken road,

 

Reasons unknown to me

 

Even though I try to remember why.

 

Another missing piece of this puzzle

 

Seems to elude my every thought

 

Only now do I realize

 

Nothing can bring you back alive

 

© 2008 Diana Owen Busy with Life BBS!


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very good

Posted 16 Years Ago


this is sad and written so beautifully.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This was sad but beyond that... Awesome acrostic. The flow is really good and your lines make sense anyway they are laid out.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very poignant; somber and sad. Nice job of portraying your thoughts, yet the poem need not have the first letter of every word a different color to spell out the title. Your words and writing are strong enough without this attempt to make it more creative. Subtlety goes much further. Still, I enjoyed reading it as I'm will others.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow this is beautiful! Thats all I can say!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Diana, this is such an aching feeling. You expressed it so well. I love how your crafted this piece. The last line cuts like a knife. An excellent write.

Posted 17 Years Ago


I've got to be careful no to read too many of your poems in a single day. They are so dark and so sad. I'm trying not to be depressed on this cold, rainy day, and you aren't helping. I'm lucky never to have lost a loved one that close (even at my advanced age!), but I think you really bring the emotion to life in your poem. Good work.

Posted 17 Years Ago


great flow to this piece. I especially liked the lines
"Now I walk endlessly

Down this broken road,

Reasons unknown to me"
Beautiful.


Posted 17 Years Ago


Wow, this poem can really touch home for me.

Posted 17 Years Ago


I can relate to this one. Love how it was written. sad

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Diana Owen Busy with Life BBS!
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I am a 36 year old married female.. My passion is to write. My genre is mostly in paranormal, paranormal romances and fantasy fiction. I have three wonderful children (Danyale 19- Josh 16 and Kymb.. more..

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