A Ghost upon my Heart

You are standing there but you look right through me.

I speak but you do not answer.

My foot steps make no sound.

If I had a heart it would be breaking.

I long to touch you, but If i try my hand

would pass through you.

My nearness is just a chill in the night

I feel tears but they do not fall.

As the wind sweeps me away.

A ghost upon your memories.

a ghost upon my heart.

 

Reviews

[Autumn Dawn Gorny]

The lost love and the one left behind... very touching. The photo makes it even more powerful.

[Emily B]

Your words work verry well with the photo. Good job!

[Shane Patrick]

the picture after reading shows you the existance, I love the discriptions . well done!

[Sean M. Addams]

very powerful read and lot use of good imagery here... very good job on this

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Oh..wow. This is brilliant. What an amazing write this is, wonderfully done.