Blood Tears

Her Tear drops fall like acid rain,

as she looks at herself through soulless eyes.

 

A simple life, of happiness lost through temptation.

Whispers of promise lured her, now death surrounds her.

 

The hopes and dreams she use to have scattered to the night winds

now nameless faces are her crimsons passion.

 

Once where there had been beauty and sunshine is now only

darkness and shadows.

Creatures of the underworld that she only thought as fiction

are now her own harsh reality.

 

Beautiful to the eye, yet ugliness is her life.

She is forever cursed, she lives to see others die,

and she will always cry blood tears.

Reviews

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This reminds me of the character that I created Countess Evelynn Valkzak, and her great sadness she has for her life. I do love your Vampire poem and your idea here. But I feel that it could be written better, I believe you can do it, because of the other poetry that I have already review and they are wonderful. Please don't take this to heart, and stop what you do best, I'm not saying you are an awful poet, I'm stating you have the talent just put it to the test, and write your best...This poem needs a little something to make it like your rest, wonderful.

[Britt]

This was beautiful..I really enjoyed it.

[Crazy Cat Man]

great piece. very chilling and sad.

[Gandré]

i would give u a hug and lots of love in your hands. thoughtful and making me almost paralyzed cuz i wanna help. such longing for pain is about "just to feel anything at all" and i have fear then that this person is in danger and i need to help. darling. pretty sadness.