Without You

This is a little sappy. I wrote it a while back when me and my husband (then my boyfriend) were fighting.

If you can really hold a mirror up to the eyes of your soul

 

then I would show you your happiness and the dreams that

 

you may behold.

 

If I can rub a magical lamp and make a magical genie appear

 

then maybe he will grant you your every wish so that your

 

sorrow might disappear.

 

If I could love you until tomorrow

May tomorrow never come

 

If I could hold the source to never ending happiness

then I would gladly give you some.

 

If I can hold you in my arms forever and a day

with words of love upon my lips that I shall

never tire to say.

 

Because without you in my life, my life would be on hold

for move heart would ever have another place to go.

Author's Note

see I told you it was sappy... and it is old, this is just a restore.

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

I am so sorry it took me so long to review this I have been crazy busy at work this week. Inventory. blah.

This is once again a showing how powerful of a writer you are. You pulled me in at the beginning at never let go of my attention and made me feel a connection on a personal level which is just one of the many reason you are an amazingly talented writer.

Great Job!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Absolutely beautiful work... bravo... very passionate words...

[* Mourning Starr *]

Awww I did not think it was sappy at all I thought it was very sweet.....I think being able to write down how much you love someone means so much more than just saying it, anyone can do that and most of the time it's just words......We say it so much that some how it seems to lose it's importance.......Like pass the butter please......lol.....I loved the poem great work....

[Eric]

You're right about this being a bit sappy. However, if our relationships are to survive, I think we need it. So, this is nice. Especially if you're the one it's written to.

Thanks for sharing.

[Nathan Strange]

This is nice but I think you should read it out loud to yourself,it needs a bit of touching up with the grammari hope u dont mind me saying :-)it's good thoughi mean it!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This is such a beautiful poem. Wonderful!!!

Heather

[Bubo]

I'm sure that would have worked beautifully!
A really open honest piece.........and the depth of
giving shows your love without conditions, of course, I loved the
end....thank you for sharing!

[Zane Mathias]

very beautiful. well written and flows very good.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This should have stopped the argument I would think.. some very beautiful words of love and willingness to give your all to this person.. it is beautiful..Very nice..I hope it worked lol

You added an s on comes in the line then may tomorrow never comes.. just to let you know i do the same..

Beautiful poem..

Chloe
xoxo