Without You

This is a little sappy. I wrote it a while back when me and my husband (then my boyfriend) were fighting.

If you can really hold a mirror up to the eyes of your soul

 

then I would show you your happiness and the dreams that

 

you may behold.

 

If I can rub a magical lamp and make a magical genie appear

 

then maybe he will grant you your every wish so that your

 

sorrow might disappear.

 

If I could love you until tomorrow

May tomorrow never come

 

If I could hold the source to never ending happiness

then I would gladly give you some.

 

If I can hold you in my arms forever and a day

with words of love upon my lips that I shall

never tire to say.

 

Because without you in my life, my life would be on hold

for move heart would ever have another place to go.

Author's Note

see I told you it was sappy... and it is old, this is just a restore.

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

I am so sorry it took me so long to review this I have been crazy busy at work this week. Inventory. blah.

This is once again a showing how powerful of a writer you are. You pulled me in at the beginning at never let go of my attention and made me feel a connection on a personal level which is just one of the many reason you are an amazingly talented writer.

Great Job!!!

[Natalie C]

Oh Diana, this is truly a wonderful tribute to someone clearly very important in your life - your husband. I tend to agree with Stacilynn, I didn't find this piece that sappy. It is just a little glimpse into your deepest emotions and I am sure this piece must have worked.

Specially with an ending like this....
Because without you in my life, My life would be
on hold, for my love would never have another place to go..

Great write, really enjoyed reading it!

[Staci Brown]

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I'm not one to get into the "love" poems, but I didn't find anything "sappy" about these words and emotions. They were beautiful! I don't know how anyone could read this and walk away... Great depth and insight into your emotions of love for your husband!

Faerie Blessings!
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[Anna Marie]

This is quite the sappy poem but I think we all have these moments. It was very cutesy and every once in a while that is a good thing.

[Jon]

A really nice little insight into your feelings - enjoyed it.

[Fantasyfairy]

Awww, so sweet, and yea, a bit too blah for my taste, but what the hell, everyone needs a little blah in their life at some point hun. Really beautiful and well written, flows lovely too. This should stop any argument in its tracks and I hope it made him see sense and stay with you. Thanx so much for sharing hun XX

[Crazy Cat Man]

nice piece

[Obsidianbutterfly]

awwwww that's sweet!! I like it. *HUGS*

[Stacy A. Foster]

There's a little bit of "newbie" writing style in this but you mentioned that at the beginning (3 years old). Not sappy at all... and there's nothing wrong with sappy anyway. :)

This is very sweet and the lovely and passionate message you are sending comes across very clear. The pics you use complement this piece well.

It's so very sweet... I bet your hubby loved it. Thanks for opening up and sharing this side of you with us.

xoxoxo,
Stacy

[Kelley Pascoe]

very touching peace Diana so glad you shared it with us.
Kelley Frost