Hatred

I am your darkness

I am your lie.

I am the creature that lives deep inside....

 

I am your hate.

I am the fire.

I am the fuel that you desire....

 

I am the fog inside of your head.

I am the monster that lives under your bed...

 

I am the tears that make you cry.

I am the drug that makes you think you can fly....

 

I am the razor that cuts you so deep.

I am the reason why you keep losing sleep...

 

I am the feeling of constant pain.

I am the reason why you stand in the rain....

 

I a hatred, I am lies, I am everything that you despise...

I am you

Reviews

[Stacy A. Foster]

Yes, it's (darkness) in all of us. Can we control it? I feel evil at times but my feelings of potential guilt keep me in check. LOL

I am hatred, I am lies, I am everything that you despise..
I am you......

The monster within us...
Emotionally creepy and so true.

xoxoxo,
Stacy

[* Mourning Starr *]

I would have to agree with Kelley on the being pissed at someone............But this piece was phenomenal you really captured the essence of Hatred...You did a wonderful job here Diana..............

[Kelley Pascoe]

WOW sounds like you were really pissed at someone? Well it had a real dark taste left in your mouth after reading it. Great write as always. Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

[Twilight Dancer]

Wonderful, gutsy write! Good flow, imagery, and full of dark emotion. You have captured what I have always believed to be true - there are two sides to everyone and given the right set of circumstances, the beast of hate will rear its ugly head. Hate is also a waste of energy; it will zap you to the core, so I try to keep mine in check. But being human, it comes out occasionally and I use my writing to vent it out - I want to enjoy what life I have left with all the positive gusto I can find. Great work and thanks for sharing ... TD :)

[Jenny Davis]

We are all hate, but we also are all love. And we definitely ARE our own worst enemies!
I liked this, it flowed well! :)

[M J Moore]

Deep and dark, ringing through. It reads lyrically, with a steady beat, punch for punch. I like your darkness, the way you cast in negative, painting the picture by the outlines, not the object itself. Wonderful job.

mj

[Obsidianbutterfly]

Wow so I can blame you for all my crap...LOL. Geat poem!! I'd love to use this on my Myspace!!

[Susan M. Fenn]

Oh wow.. this was a wonderful piece, dark, and deadly. Almost as if the person's own life, was their poison. Excellent job dear.
xo
Susan

[Robert Luna]

For the lies that dwell deep within
Call my name from shadowy pain
Darkening you dreams
Consuming more than you know
I breed and and deceive
But yet you beckon me on
Give me your everything
I take more than you care to give
I am hatred prepare to know me.

I loved this Such a dark and powerful write. I am continuously impressed by your work.

Wonderful Job!!!

[James K. Blaylock]

I rather enjoyed this piece. To me it seems like it'd make for killer song lyrics. Keep up the great writes.