Hatred

I am your darkness

I am your lie.

I am the creature that lives deep inside....

 

I am your hate.

I am the fire.

I am the fuel that you desire....

 

I am the fog inside of your head.

I am the monster that lives under your bed...

 

I am the tears that make you cry.

I am the drug that makes you think you can fly....

 

I am the razor that cuts you so deep.

I am the reason why you keep losing sleep...

 

I am the feeling of constant pain.

I am the reason why you stand in the rain....

 

I a hatred, I am lies, I am everything that you despise...

I am you

Reviews

[Stacy A. Foster]

Yes, it's (darkness) in all of us. Can we control it? I feel evil at times but my feelings of potential guilt keep me in check. LOL

I am hatred, I am lies, I am everything that you despise..
I am you......

The monster within us...
Emotionally creepy and so true.

xoxoxo,
Stacy

[After Midnight]

That was awesome! I loved that there was a rhythm even though the number of lines and each stanza changed. I loved that it rhymed. I like poems that rhyme and I loved the flow. It was really put together well.

[Diana Owen Busy with Li..]

this is only fiction

[DonGilbert]

i can relate

[Vampstyle]

excellent

[Heart Of A Wolf]

Self hate is the strongest hate and the most dangerous.

[Tabitha Kaufman]

This, for a lot of people will be true. At some point in there lives it will have been a feeling that they have felt or lived with. You put it into good words for this peice. Relating with your readers is a big thing these days.

Great peice,
Tabitha

[S. P. Vaporis]

the hate that lives in us makes us who we are as much as the love? just like any emotion it needs to be controlled and through that harnessed. thanks for the thought to ponder!

[Anastasia]

I really like this! .. I love the idea you had to make this piece, and most of all I love the ending! Amazing!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

wow. to me, that was a genius poem. good job!

[Michael Lasalle]

pure brilliance, Diana, this poem
speaks as dak sentiments defining hatred, dark.....
you completely rock, peace, mike