Less then Perfect

I watched you walk away for the last time.

 

I watched you hold me back, but no more.

 

I have cried my last tear for you.

 

I have done all that I can.

 

I am done being the one you blame.

 

I am tired of being second.

 

I've loved you enough for the both of us.

 

I have loved you through it all.

 

As I watch you close the door, I've realized,

 

That you are less thean perfect too.

Reviews

[Britt]

I am someone who seems to put everyone else before herself.
I let people control my life and my decisions.
I one day hope to be able to do exaclty what is written in this poem.
Be able to say no for once and do things my way.
Gosh I love your writings you are amazing.

[DonGilbert]

=)

[Vampstyle]

this poem is not less than perfect. Great job.

[Lauren Stegg]

Straight out, declarative sentences:
"I am done..."
"I am tired..."
I like the emotion in this piece very much, and I have to say I can relate to it.

I noticed a typo in the second to last line. "Realize" should be "realized". Actually, that line switches to present tense, so changing "'I've" to "I" might make more sense.

Highly enjoyable.

[* Mourning Starr *]

Wow what a sad piece filled with so much emotion and very well conveyed....great job on this piece Diana...............Well done

[Obsidianbutterfly]

We've all been here I think. Nice job.