KISS FROM AN ANGEL

She closes her eyes,

her heart it does flutter....

 

The warmth envelopes here

Like the arms of a lover.....

 

She sings a song so sweet

and so beautiful.....

 

She holds the world in the palm

of her hands,

As the wind whispers its words softly

in her ear.....

 

So every once in a while she falls

from heave for that some one,

who deserves a kiss from an angel.

 

 

Reviews

[Lisa Verdon]

Very beautiful, Diana. It just seems to flow so naturally and so gently--much like your angel. The imagery is lovely. These lines are my favorite: "She closes her eyes,
her heart it does flutter....

The warmth envelopes her
Like the arms of a lover....."

[Obsidianbutterfly]

Wow that's so pretty and sweet. Nice flow and description.

[Tomás Ó C..]

Last night I think it was me....

[Brette Medb]

That had such beautiful flow and it was so sweet.... I really liked it!

[Susan M. Fenn]

awww... that is so sweet.. uplifting.. I have an angel, and I get my kisses everyday.

[Celtic Cat]

Very sweet. I've been kissed by an angel once or twice. Love it when they come to help you when you need them most! Nice write!!

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I like a lot. Its very softly and beautifully written. I'm glad I got a chance to read this, thanks.

[Natalie C]

Oh Diana, I am so glad you pulled this from your archives. What a wonderful piece filled with the warmest and sincerest emotions. Your words surround me, like the angels that watch over us everyday. Lovely flow and the imagery were excellent, contributing to the frailness of this poem.
I really adored your ending...

So every once in a while she falls
From heaven for that some one
Who deserves a kiss from an angel.....

Brilliant, thank you once again for sharing!

[Zane Mathias]

Beautiful

[S. P. Vaporis]

so delicate and fragile! I love this!

[Britt]

I found this to be beautiful.