KISS FROM AN ANGEL

She closes her eyes,

her heart it does flutter....

 

The warmth envelopes here

Like the arms of a lover.....

 

She sings a song so sweet

and so beautiful.....

 

She holds the world in the palm

of her hands,

As the wind whispers its words softly

in her ear.....

 

So every once in a while she falls

from heave for that some one,

who deserves a kiss from an angel.

 

 

Reviews

[Lisa Verdon]

Very beautiful, Diana. It just seems to flow so naturally and so gently--much like your angel. The imagery is lovely. These lines are my favorite: "She closes her eyes,
her heart it does flutter....

The warmth envelopes her
Like the arms of a lover....."

[Synmuh Zurh Jynuh]

Nice poem by the way.. it can be sang.. reminds me of lips of an angel.. ^^, but deep inside i feel the poem is for a mother that sings his baby to sleep..

[Stacy A. Foster]

So every once in a while she falls
From heaven for that some one
Who deserves a kiss from an angel.....

I would love a kiss from an angel like that! :)
Suggestion: someone (combine)

I really like the title of this. It's perfect.

Very nice.
Stacy :)

[M J Moore]

So beautiful, I even read it twice, just to capture it a bit more. Soft and serene. Delicate.

So every once in a while she falls
From heaven for that some one
Who deserves a kiss from an angel.....

This stanza is my favorite. It leaves the reader with some beautiful imagery to fill their glass. Excellent.

mj

[Bubo]

Such a lovely piece filled with soft warm images.
The thought of an angel coming from heaven to kiss someone
who needs it..........lovely.

[Lauren Stegg]

This is a generic phrase, so I try not to use it often, but this poem really did have a beautiful flow. The way it's written is so rhythmic and gentle, like waves in water.
I spotted a typo in the following line:
"As the wind whispers it words softly"
The "it" should be plural.
Well done, Diana. Lovely work.

[* Mourning Starr *]

very beautifully written..............

[Alex]

don't we all fall for the "right?" man ...sigh

[Robert Luna]

Different style for you but definitely a pleasant read. The passion that flow from your words is wonderful and so fitting this picture. This was a great write showing a emotion of purity.

Great Job!!!

[Yvonne Heidt]

Diana - this is beautiful and heart warming. Very gentle. I loved it.

I have one small edit:
As the wind whispers it(s) words softly

[Crazy Cat Man]

:)