KISS FROM AN ANGEL

She closes her eyes,

her heart it does flutter....

 

The warmth envelopes here

Like the arms of a lover.....

 

She sings a song so sweet

and so beautiful.....

 

She holds the world in the palm

of her hands,

As the wind whispers its words softly

in her ear.....

 

So every once in a while she falls

from heave for that some one,

who deserves a kiss from an angel.

 

 

Reviews

[Lisa Verdon]

Very beautiful, Diana. It just seems to flow so naturally and so gently--much like your angel. The imagery is lovely. These lines are my favorite: "She closes her eyes,
her heart it does flutter....

The warmth envelopes her
Like the arms of a lover....."

[DonGilbert]

beautiful

[Vampstyle]

beautifully written.

[Tabitha Kaufman]

This was a very beautiful and warm peice. I enjoyed it greatly with feeling simelar to your writing. It is always good when you can truley feel the words with in you.

Thank you for sharing,
Tabitha

[Gary H]

This is very beautiful Diana. One thing that I personally found awkward though was the third stanza. I just felt this would be better swopped with the fourth.
Really this could be made into a poster with the picture and poem together.

Brilliant.

[Fantasyfairy]

Such a beautiful poem. To be kissed by an angel, oh, if only we could all be that blessed. Such sweet thought, thanx for writing this hun. XX

[Lucy Kennedy]

I agree short and sweet a beautiful piece. I loved it. Amazing. Great ending. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Nice, very nice... short and sweet... an angel's kiss, somthing we all could use. Ilove the last stanza, perfect ending!!!

[Rea]

oooooooooooo I can feel her touch......vividly thank you , a lovely write

[J. Elsie]

*sigh*
Why can't she fall my way?

[Sara.]

Great poem, Very sweet to be for the special someone.
Loved your way of expressing how she's an Angel, By falling from Heaven.
Splendid work. n_n