You

A girl who witnesses someone going through depression and did nothing about it till it was too late.

They say you are ugly,

They say you are horrendous,

But you are lovely,

And in my eyes you are gorgeous.

I see you walk through the hallway all alone,

You start to wish you stayed at home,

But even there you are not safe,

From the taunts from your father whenever he was in a furious chafe.

I see you sitting under a tree,

Your face is hiding behind your hands,

As you cry with unanswered pleas,

I am the only one who can see the scars under your arm bands.

You say you just want to take the pain away,

You think self harm is the only way,

But really its not okay,

I swear tomorrow will be a brand new day.

You hide in your bedroom,

Behind a locked door,

You feel abandoned,

As you grab the knife from your draw.

I am at your funeral,  not many people came,

Most of them didn't even know your name,

I am the one to blame,

I could've helped but now it's too late and I bow my head in shame.

Reviews

[Deep]

You just wrote amazing, while reading I wish the poem should not end. Every inch I was shifting my eyes it was like a picture of some unknown sorrow sprinted in front of me.
A perfect beginning , awesome middle, and a painful ending.
It was just like a image of myself in the written form, and that is what defines writer and his power of pen and thoughts.
Wonderful write!

[Olivia]

i like how you write from this perspective, makes it even more interesting

[Jake Donald Stephens]

Most people do close their eyes to the pain of others, and make it into a joke, and encourage them to kill themselves because they think it's funny and it makes them feel good to torment others. You see it a great deal. I think what we decent people need to do is band together against these idiots, and destroy them.
Great poem, Crystal. I love the amount of thought you put into your work.

[Happy hours]

Tommorow will be a grand new day...
Nicely penned :)
Thanks for sharing

[Peyton Light]

Great job! Loved this :) You truly captured the feelings of someone who looks at someone else in a higher light then others :) I applaud you :)

[KittyKatgirl]

Thank you so much. ^-^

[Érenn]

Wow intense. I know what it feels like to see someone wishing to end his/her life. Unfortunately seen a lot more than I wanted to. But that's where stepping in and stopping it comes. Each line here filled with intense imagery and raw and honest feelings here. I know how they end up feeling, I know it takes a whole damn lot to change one's mind, but I know it can be done. Thank you for sharing

[Curtis.Lenker]

Wow. I know how it feels to see some one go through this and end his/her life. Knowing that you could have done something but you chose not to is the worst feeling ever. Great write here. The imagery is very intense. I could literally feel every line. Very good write here.

[KittyKatgirl]

Thank you so much. :) And yes I written this poem so there is more awareness. If you know someone is going through this, do your best to help. Even if it doesn't work and it ends in the same way, at least you tried. Always make sure to let them know that you care, sometimes that might not be enough but at least they know someone did care about them.

[Curtis.Lenker]

I agree. Do not worry I will let them know. Its not problem at all. I am going to look for more of your poetry.

[KittyKatgirl]

I am afraid this is the only poem I have written. I think I have written a couple others but they're horrible. My first one was the first I've ever written and it isn't written personally it's just something that I randomly written. The second one which is the lonely girl has a similar concept to this.

[Tsubaki Kuro]

beautiful poem here. I love it. I would give you 200/100 but i can't. So you get 100/100

[KittyKatgirl]

Thank you so much. :)

[Tsubaki Kuro]

No Problem. :)

[Davidgeo]

You know, I don't think you're ugly. I think you have a pretty soul, imagine if you didn't write like an a*****e? I would like to collaborate on a poem with you. For realzee's.... Private message me, I have some ideas. You won't regret it, I can make semi pro magic with verbs vowels and nouns and s**t.... You can even have all the credit...

[KittyKatgirl]

This isn't about me. Yeah I have gone through depression but I don't think anybody noticed, this is a warning for others to help others before it's too late. But to you like you said "who are we to make them feel guilty." We do not aim to make them feel guilty people like me who want to help others fighting through depression are aiming to make that person believe that there is more to life then what is going on now. That there is people who care and they're not alone. And if you weren't such a jerk to me and other writers I would take you up on that offer but I won't. In fact it is probably a trap and I would never take all the credit if anything I would give the other person all the credit. If I did though you probably would use it against me and make me look like the bad guy.

[Davidgeo]

Insecurity will always be your downfall

[Not here]

I like this very much :) great poem. you've definitely deserved all the WOAH U GOT 600 views!!! dang girl lol. great job :) i'm proud of you. fantastic poem. 100 from me

[KittyKatgirl]

Aww thank you Dante. :) But don't forget each time you go back to look at the poem that counts as a view as well so don't worry 600 people did not view it. Thanks so much Dante you just made my day. :)

[Not here]

ohhh okay :) well still proud

[KittyKatgirl]

Aww well thank you but not as proud as I am of you. Thank you so much Dante I really needed the smile you brought. :)

[Not here]

Anytime anytime :) Keep being awesome.

[KittyKatgirl]

You too. :)

[thecavaliar]

Ok, it's good you are aware what a creep he is. Mostly he just gets blocked.

[KittyKatgirl]

Yeah I would block him but I added him as a friend so I could see who he has attacked and stand up for them.

[Davidgeo]

Oh really,... the cavaliar counting votes again? Kittenface.... don't sell your soul to the devil to spite a bad man. Look into your new friend.... he's less friendly than you think kitten.

[Davidgeo]

At least I have bad poetry to show for it

[Davidgeo]

clown baby doesn't even write... it's pure propaganda. hate me for better reasons baby doll... i'll love you for the same

[KittyKatgirl]

Once again you are striving for attention.

[Davidgeo]

It's because I love to hate horrible people.... you're not horrible, but you're about to get in the way of something that certainly is very very awful.... I love you cat face

[Davidgeo]

you ever watch the old Mad Max "just walk away..."

[KittyKatgirl]

The people you attack aren't horrible. The cavalier is doing soemthign good warning others of a******s like you. And sure you do...

[Not here]

hey there. that's rude. please leave. "cat face" wants no part of you, nor do the rest of us.

[Not here]

@ hans face whtever his name is.

[Davidgeo]

Hi.... we are all BFF's here... Ask me about my huge feet and inability to maintain meaningful relationships.. I like your face.... let's be good friends then.

[Not here]

my profile pic is a koala but okay. and yeah we are all BFF's here on this "fake writing website" as you call it that you still troll. we all appreciate it. and i really dont care about your feet. or really your relationships. and yeah we can be good friends. sure thing. now audios amigo