The lonely girl

The lonely girl

A Poem by KittyKatgirl
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A girl who felt like she didn't belong in the world.

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Nobody knew what she was going through

Things would’ve been different if they knew

She cried herself to sleep every night

Her parents tried to help but she put up a fight

In the day she pretended to be happy

She fooled everybody

Her smile hid her secrets

She refused to show her weakness

Every class she sat on her own

The teachers thought she liked to be alone

One night her parents weren’t home

She went into the bathroom all alone

She had a kitchen knife

And took her own life

 

 

 

© 2015 KittyKatgirl


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I understand suicide seems to be a pitiful thing by others, Crystal - but you must experience depression on your own, where it is not just nibbling but biting at your very person. And whatever good feelings you had, trickle right out of your eyes and ears.

It is the loneliness, the confusion, the sadness, the misery - all these things contribute to self-destructive behavior. It is up to us, the friends of these people, to be more than just casual acquaintances, to let these people into our lives - that they may share their pain with you.

And to be healed in the sharing.


Posted 9 Years Ago


KittyKatgirl

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Very dark.. I can see where your coming from. This is such a big subject now days. More and more people getting depressed. It's sad. Life is full of meaning and hope. There might be moments when life isn't so good but no one should feel like this. It's not a very good feeling at all. This poem is well written and it touches the soul.

Posted 9 Years Ago


KittyKatgirl

9 Years Ago

Thank you and I agree. I hate it when people are depressed and are suicidal when they still have the.. read more
Kittyskittles

9 Years Ago

Same.. It's so sad... and to think most of them are hurting inside and no one really knows
so very sad and such a waste...life has so much beauty in it...i weep for all those who give up too soon...

Posted 9 Years Ago


KittyKatgirl

9 Years Ago

Thank you yeah I have a friend who keeps putting herself down because she doesn't have a boyfriend a.. read more
wow thats very sad. but i understand where your coming from, and its terrible tat these things happen

Posted 9 Years Ago


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KittyKatgirl

9 Years Ago

Thank you Dante
what a sad ending. People wasnt able to notice her pain at all.

Posted 9 Years Ago


KittyKatgirl

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
This is so tragic yet so beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


KittyKatgirl

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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KittyKatgirl
KittyKatgirl

QLD, Australia



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