Whips of heat and made of flame Kiss every inch of me Its love swallows me whole And begs me to stay
I follow him down The searing burn of passion compels Tender and sweet is the beginning A caress here, a peck there Momentum mounts, and we go on Unafraid and unashamed
Like fire, we are not controlled Unless it is brought to a screeching halt
But if all that's left of Humanity Is two people and a bed, What is there to stop?
My Dear Writing Friend,
As I muse this write one word comes to my mind to sum it up. That is the word delirium. You have created a most thought provoking write, well done.
Blessings, Laughing-Bear
Delirium |diˈli(ə)rēəm|
noun
an acutely disturbed state of mind that occurs in fever, intoxication, and other disorders and is characterized by restlessness, illusions, and incoherence of thought and speech.
• wild excitement or ecstasy.
ORIGIN mid 16th cent.: from Latin, from delirare ‘deviate, be deranged’ (literally ‘deviate from the furrow’ ), from de- ‘away’ + lira ‘ridge between furrows.’
The ending of the world could be worst.
"But if all that's left of Humanity
Is two people and a bed,
What is there to stop?"
A interesting poem. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
What vast imagery you paint on your canvas... the colors of red fire consuming all else.. and in the end, what passion is left to take you deeper? Powerful and profound, Emily!
My Dear Writing Friend,
As I muse this write one word comes to my mind to sum it up. That is the word delirium. You have created a most thought provoking write, well done.
Blessings, Laughing-Bear
Delirium |diˈli(ə)rēəm|
noun
an acutely disturbed state of mind that occurs in fever, intoxication, and other disorders and is characterized by restlessness, illusions, and incoherence of thought and speech.
• wild excitement or ecstasy.
ORIGIN mid 16th cent.: from Latin, from delirare ‘deviate, be deranged’ (literally ‘deviate from the furrow’ ), from de- ‘away’ + lira ‘ridge between furrows.’
Hey, I'm Emily. I go to Los Angeles Valley College, and I write poetry and some short stories. In my free time, I draw, play video games, and play with my dogs Zeke and Roscoe. Zeke is a Great Dane/Bo.. more..