The Shade of Night

A story form another site. had to change names because they were animals.It wouldn't make sense.

She laughed at the thunder booming overhead.The lightning was  
sneered at every time it struck.While her younger sister  clung to her bed
awaiting the awful sunshine,Serena was slowly realizing who she
really was. She was brave. She was strong.She often had
premonitions of what was to come. And she was always right. Serena
was a storm shade, master of evil weather. An even darker light filled
the sky. She saw the drapes begin their dance. The house was never
drafty, and all the windows were shut tight. Adele made sure of that.
Maybe it's my powers finally coming in,she thought.Suddenly, the
door blew off its hinges."No! It is not. Not yet."The spirit cried.
Serena stumbled back a few steps.For a moment,she thought she had
seen him and knew him."You!"she shouted at the cloaked figure."Ah.
You seem to remember me, but only a little. Your premonitions were
correct."He put his hand on her shoulder,then continued."You will accept
the offer following,I presume? You always wanted to be a storm shade."
"I have..."she confessed. But she had learned a hard lesson before he came
along.Wishes were always granted at a price.The tattered cloak fluttered
and gave Serena a chill."At what cost?" she inquired. The master shade
slowly took off his hood. His pale face and shaved silver locks shocked the
room with its brightness.Serena instantly knew what was happening. She
called on a spell Nicelle,her witch tutor,taught her.The spirit was taken aback by the
raspy incantation."Thas canta fantchoo taq thas meir feurl.Vastin ber
tchiq!" The figure was disintegrated,but he was heard for many miles
saying this:"How could you know?"

Author's Note

It's a little rough.Any help appreciated.