Maybe we are two ingredients in The same primordial soup Or we became the first star the Big Bang spewed out I don't know. Our origins don't matter. What matters is that the energy of our being manifested Into beings that understand iotas of what we are. What we may be.
Maye we once were binary stars, Orbiting each other until one of us explodes Leaving the other surrounded by remains.
But I firmly believe we're not always pairs. Maybe our soup stirred more of us together Or that very first supernova cast us all far away. Maybe we divided our energy and we keep finding Clones of our bond like breadcrumbs in the forest. I like that one best.
If good luck is real We'll end up as lovers, But there are some things a soul learns alone.
If I could remember every thing we were, I would. If I could know every place we were, I would. If I could remember our multitude, I'd do it in a Human heartbeat.
Maybe once we liked on different planets Connected only by the same sense of Loneliness Emptiness Vastness
There are innumerable ways to be bound together Family Friends An artist and their muse A pack or a pride A revolution and its cause Even organs in a body (I'll be the kidneys, the lungs are all yours) I just hope we're together.
To describe this condition we (possibly) my (not) have, I've searched far and wide, and I've come to One solution. We. A word without singularity, A feeling of joy and togetherness. A commitment. The closest thing we've got to happiness.
Emily: I love it...was excited, haven't seen a poem of yours lately and as always you didn't dissapoint. I heard myself saying aloud; I agree with everything! I love the title and your explanations, desires, questions - visualizing tiny cells, pulled together by another's aura...by something unexplainable. Into what we may be...thoughts of wisdom; I hope everyone reads it; it's unique, beautiful; love the metaphors, and the visuals; it's funny, it's almost like a dialougue, but he/she's out there listening. I wondered why you chose kidneys and lungs/2 & 2, we need to survive I suppose? What imagination; to describe this condition, certain it's me; kind of stumbled - anyway, thanks again. Dale
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much Dale. yeah, I've tried to finish a longer piece I've been working, but inspiration.. read moreThank you so much Dale. yeah, I've tried to finish a longer piece I've been working, but inspiration of any kind didn't come until yesterday. Hopefully you'll the long poem soon!
9 Years Ago
Your welcome...but thanks...let me know when you finish please...d
an almost universal poem Emily, from the far reaches of space your love flows into the here and now until the realization, no need to wander so far because love is just being 'We' very well done :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Richard! You really understand the piece.
Hey, I'm Emily. I go to Los Angeles Valley College, and I write poetry and some short stories. In my free time, I draw, play video games, and play with my dogs Zeke and Roscoe. Zeke is a Great Dane/Bo.. more..