Good Days

Good Days

A Poem by Emily

Today I feel
Effervescent,
Feminine,
And beautiful.

My confidence blooms with rainbow colors,
Each bubble a perfect sphere of hope.
As they pop I rejoice,
Frolicking in the spray.
Today is an utopian day.

Without a doubt Eve is within me,
A small part of her ether resides in my blood.
I am graced with this form, and I love
 Every rolling hill and sparkling lake.
Parts of girlhood scatter like diamonds
Today I find just enough for a ring.

The classics are awed by me.
I can be painted and sculpted,
But they can't get enough of me.
I have collected all their works inspired by me,
And I'm still compelled to take 5 more selfies.
Like Snow White and Aurora,
Princes live to kiss me.

Today I feel
Effervescent,
Feminine,
And beautiful.
Today I am me.

© 2015 Emily


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My confidence blooms with rainbow colors,
Each bubble a perfect sphere of hope.
As they pop I rejoice,
Frolicking in the spray.
Today is an utopian day.

these lines are the most emotional,really touching.i really like it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Emily

9 Years Ago

Thank you Usman!
Awesome wording in this write. Expressing emotions perfectly and descriptively with good flow :) Good work Emily :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Emily

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Aaron!
Today you are beautiful Emily! A celebration of all that's good to life and a tribute to your femininity you have collected the feelings of a beautiful morning and strung them together in this happy but poignant poem, very well written my friend ^_^

Posted 9 Years Ago


Emily

9 Years Ago

Thank you Richard! Very insightful.
Loved the way you wrote it,

My confidence blooms with rainbow colors,
Each bubble a perfect sphere of hope.
As they pop I rejoice,
Frolicking in the spray.
Today is an utopian day.

Nice wording.

armin. ..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Emily

9 Years Ago

Thank you Armin!

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Hey, I'm Emily. I go to Los Angeles Valley College, and I write poetry and some short stories. In my free time, I draw, play video games, and play with my dogs Zeke and Roscoe. Zeke is a Great Dane/Bo.. more..

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