Reality

A poem I wrote!

Memories echo in my mind,

For a path of life yet to find,

The road is scary and the light is gone,

All there is, is hope for dawn,

There was a time, had good luck,

In the game of love, went amok,

Lived so full, yet so vain,

For I discovered only gain,

But, then a storm passed, and scars never healed,

My entity, an ugly naked truth revealed,

And now here I am, miserable but grown,

Now lost, after being overthrown,

But I found a true me,

And turned on in to reality.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

When we accept who we are. We gain wisdom.
"But I found a true me,
And turned on in to reality."
We will play many people and if we are lucky. We become what we wanted. Outstanding poetry, made the reader think.
Coyote

[Ms. Twitch]

Beautifully written! Touched me in such a personal way, reminded me how I felt the few months after my serious relationship ended. Thank you for sharing this.

[Trisha Threason]

This is incredible. It's written very well and allows an entry in some ways into your mind, Allowig the reader to learn about the writer. Well done!

[David]

Nice! Appears you allow others to determine what you are writing.

[Ruth]

Powerful poem addressing the self and recognition...such reflection will serve you well :)

[E G TEN]

Nicely put and well versed you had captured such an image
of this poor vainly soul in a precise manner of accuracy.
Thanks for sharing, and for the Ad.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Wonderful poem, Dhrit... Your rhyme is fluid, not forced.. love the images you project.

[Terrence Chang]

I encourage to keep writing and hone your skills to the next level. It is really good for your age

[Rainheart]

Man this was good, are you sure you're 13? Just kidding, your words are really beautiful, I'd buy your book if you ever decide to publish a collection of your poems. Well done.

[Dhrit Khona]

Thanks a Lot!

PS- I really am 13!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Dhrit your words are heartfelt and profound.
Its filled with innocence of learning and finding your true self in the midst of struggles, for the day must go on.
Enjoyed reading this candour piece.