Mine and Yours

Mine and Yours

A Poem by dhoho
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The first few unsure feelings that I loved

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My Space
Your Space
Side by side, inches away yet it feels too far
I long to reach over and close the gap

My Hand
Your Hand
Separated by a wall of uncertainty,
You shift closer then retract; the sound of

Your Breath
My Breath
Synchronized.  The rise and fall of your chest quickens 
Mine follows, as my heartbeat joins the race

My Touch
Your Touch
Not a question of lust, but one of expression
As I ache to tell you how I feel

My Thoughts 
Your Thoughts
With hope that they're similar, but fear that they're not
So for now I sit in contemplative silence 
As I question the possibility of 

My Space
Your Space
Becoming Our Space. 

© 2011 dhoho


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Warm and sweet, well done I loved it.

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i love this piece, warm and inviting. excellent write!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really love this.. a new favorite for sure..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can relate... This just made my day, again :) please keep writing, you're just awesome at it!

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