Into the Night

Into the Night

 

One time I saw the stars shine bright,
when I was left into the night.

 

And moonbeams I could surely sense,
as cooler air blew through the fence.

 

Was I left out here all day long,
because I had done something wrong?

 

Had the Farmer just forgotten me,
while somewhere else he had to be?

 

And soon the night was frightening,
while eerie things began to sing.

 

As I was scared and losing hope,
the Farmer showed up with a rope…

 

I’m sorry Bull, to me he said,
the battery in the truck went dead.

 

Reviews

[Ruth]

This is eerie!
Strange things happen at nightfall in remote areas! lol
xx

[Doctor JKC]

American cows seem to have that edge of fear.
Sorry, I didn't mean that as a slight to you.
I'll offer my psychological services to any cow.

Big fun!
Jack/Dr.Callaghan

[Honeypot]

AH, I love this one! Its so cute. And its so well written. It's flawless as far as I can tell. Great job.

[Phibby Venable]

i love this & especially the ending!!! the way the bull is worrying and wondering & the farmer
arriving with a simple explanation. reminds me of the tendency to build things up to a frightful
point, only to find there was nothing to fear.

[S.S.P.]

very good, clearly executed and well written :)