The Bumble Bee

The Bumble Bee

A Poem by Brown Bull
"

Science proved that is aerodynamicaly impossible for a Bumble Bee to fly! They just never told the bee.

"

The Bumble Bee

 

One day a little bumble bee
came to my meadow green.

He was perhaps the cutest bug,
that I had ever seen.

 

And as he buzzed without a rest,
it helped me see just why.

You toil all day in what you do,
‘cause he’s not supposed to fly.

 

© 2010 Brown Bull


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Hi. You might take a look at the first line in the third stanza. Maye it was supposed to say he? Lovely poem about being yourself, I believe. I enjoyed it as I do all your work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written and enjoyed. Deserves to be seen and read by many. Thanks for the inspiration.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really? woah... then it makes a good metaphor that if we just believe, impossible things could be achieved... that faith and will can move mountains...

lovely, lovely... with all honesty, i like your poems and your subjects!



Posted 15 Years Ago


There are many odds against us when we try to do the impossible. If we "hold fast to our dreams" we just might be able to accomplish them. This was a poem filled with hope and inspiration. What type of poem is this? 868686? It is new to me. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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