My pile of glass A Poem by dewdrop

a poem that describes heartbreak

A heart is but a peice of glass,

fragile as it beats.

Anytime, it can be broken

or come to bring you peace.

Either way, know its yours to give

but watch who you do give it to.

the beginning might be an act,

next your hearts beneath their shoe.

I don't want to feel this way

but there's nothing I can do.

I've fallen for this trick before

because love is what I persue.

Healing just takes time,

and heartbreaks never last.
I'll continue to search for you,

while I sweep up my pile of glass

© 2012 dewdrop

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Celeste

Hey! This is a nice comparison to the heart with a piece of glass, in relation to it being so fragile. Even though the words you used were simple, they were still able to convey what you were trying to say here (although it wouldn't hurt to try and use other unique words!). The way you ended this poem was nicely done, especially with what you did for the last two lines. Great job. Keep writing! Posted 12 Years Ago Hey! This is a nice comparison to the heart with a piece of glass, in relation to it being so fragile. Even though the words you used were simple, they were still able to convey what you were trying to say here (although it wouldn't hurt to try and use other unique words!). The way you ended this poem was nicely done, especially with what you did for the last two lines. Great job. Keep writing! Rating /100