the promise land

don't ask, don't tell

yeah we call this hell

we scream for peace

but the war won't cease

find freedom here

the final frontier

just give up your beliefs

live in a nation of thiefs

we'll steal your heart

it won't help if your smart

so go and sell your soul

don't even bother with your goals

 

 

Reviews

[A]

WOW...intense. Very short but you definitley get your point across. Great poem! :)

[Rachel]

I really like it... no... I love it ! It is great, for some reason it reminds me of the war. Is that was it's supose to do? I guese so.