crayons

Every day she colours

Pretty pictures

Alive with colour

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A car crash killing a family

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Today she colours no more

Her crayons all neat in a row

Waiting to create pictures

I only they knew

Thy never will

Reviews

[Tiz Poetry]

its been awhile, small yet powerful.... i miss such writings

[WhoIsAmelia?]

Some errors in the last line:
I only they knew
Thy never will
i think you meant if only they knew they never will?
other than that, I really like it

[Lily Mae]

Creative write. xx well done..x

[Marie]

So I have one word to say: Wow!
Seriously. I'm don't really poetry, but this is just great.
Full of emotions, it's so beautiful.
Seriously such a good job!