if only

*emerald city as in the poem is from the wizard of oz where the 'wizard' lives :) for those that may not know

If only you can see

What I see

 

Bananas with eyes

A visor on top and

A smile plastered

On it’s face

 

If only you can see

What I see

 

Hamsters on trapezes

Juggling coconuts

With a twinkle in it’s eye

And a captivated crowd

 

If only you can see

What I see

 

Flowers that sing

Dance and spin

Leaves so bright

Just like emerald city

 

Do you see what I see?

 

Reviews

[Jess Holden]

I think I do... Your great use of descriptive words aid in that :D